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About Me
- Rusty Biesele
- Everyone has hidden talents. At some point in your childhood, you selected a fork in the road and decided which of your good talents you would pursue. My first fork led me through government funded school research, corporate funded research, finally to various bleeding edge projects in Silicon Valley. Now, I am looping backwards in time so that I can try the other fork. I am on a campaign to help kids keep those brain cells us adults no longer have. Use them or lose them.
From GT kid graduating 6th grade:
ReplyDeleteChapter 1 feedback
Favorite character- Ty
What I liked best about the chapter-
The introduction, definitely.
Next chapter
Can’t wait! The ending was really good, and how you came about it was good, too.
Other feedback
You’re saying “says” too much, so it gets a little boring. Mix it up a bit, like put says after the response/ question or use asked or responded. And if you want to see what amazing authors do (amazing by “officials.” That’s what I call people like the New York Times book report people.) , then consider something by Anthony Horowitz or Mary Downing Hahn (I think that’s her name?). They are great authors who kids love.
A book I liked from the following authors: (none of these are science fiction or use this as the main topic)
Raven’s Gate by Anthony Horowitz Gatekeepers #1
Evil Star by Anthony Horowitz Gatekeepers #2
Nightrise by Anthony Horowitz Gatekeepers #3
Time For Andrew by Mary Downing Hahn